08-24-2009, 11:12 AM
1st, save it in Png, not jpg. That Black and yellow guy looks like a mixs of pokemon, so all I can say there is that maybe try making it your self other then using pokemon sprites and just recolouring them, not saying its a bad thing but I know some sites don't like that and so on.
That Blue dude just sucks, sorry to say that, that one hand, claw thing needs alot of work on it, the hair is messed up, Don't just use black lining, try planing where the light and shadows are going to be, try learning somthing about the body and were the arms, and legs should go.
And try fixing alot of lining on this, maybe try looking up some Tutorials, I know they help.
And im a bit of a newb myself, so I hope I did help a bit, and i'm trying to be nice here.
That Blue dude just sucks, sorry to say that, that one hand, claw thing needs alot of work on it, the hair is messed up, Don't just use black lining, try planing where the light and shadows are going to be, try learning somthing about the body and were the arms, and legs should go.
And try fixing alot of lining on this, maybe try looking up some Tutorials, I know they help.
And im a bit of a newb myself, so I hope I did help a bit, and i'm trying to be nice here.