08-31-2009, 10:03 PM
yours sucks so i played with colors and stuff
never use neutral grays
in general gray instead of black looks terrible
learn how to hueshift
more interesting blends of color - mix up your hues and saturations
ditch your dumb every color gets its own outline thing; it just creates extra pointless shades. every shade must have purpose and standout.
removed the other arm because it didn't work at all and the perspective and proportion is wrong.
didn't feel like making another.
still has a lot of problems but i dont feel like messing with it anymore
never use neutral grays
in general gray instead of black looks terrible
learn how to hueshift
more interesting blends of color - mix up your hues and saturations
ditch your dumb every color gets its own outline thing; it just creates extra pointless shades. every shade must have purpose and standout.
removed the other arm because it didn't work at all and the perspective and proportion is wrong.
didn't feel like making another.
still has a lot of problems but i dont feel like messing with it anymore