(09-06-2009, 09:30 AM)bnewton Wrote: ^what he said^what nice critisism........
and at least try, not to be kidding us, you can't have spent 3-4 hours on it, I can make that, in about 5 minutes. using the stupid eraser tool, and on top of that, make her look more like rosalina, instead of a bright blue gothic chick, I've can even see you did edit 'something' and it's not even in all the poses, now don't tell me I'm wrong, cuz you've got lots of mistakes, you don't even have her floating in the air
It's supposed to help them improve, not to make them feel like idiots....
you can just make her float by the sprite being a little higher than the foreground.....
As for the rosalina, I remember her hair being a little shorter in the back, and the paper mario colors are dull. Keep that in mind. the blue's might need a little more contrast, and semmed to have a little green in them. I would also maybe make one hand holding a wand or something to show some creativity. And maybe you could make a completely custom luna, because I remember them being shiny and having a little of a different shape.
Good start, though