09-10-2009, 06:19 PM
Did you make this using some tutorial or is it from scratch? Because it looks like you used the platform tutorial. You need to edit out the Koopa's shadow, add a background, use better music, and show some effort with this game. For the opening cutscene, crop out the unregistered hypercam sign and use a program other than Windows Movie Maker. Also compress the screenshots as .PNG and re upload only, like two of them so the page doesn't take several minutes to load.
![[Image: 14.gif]](http://www.i-mockery.com/shorts/altered-beast/14.gif)