09-16-2009, 06:49 PM
Hmm, Yoshi's pretty good. Though there's a few things:
- Pupils need to be solid black like Mario's.
- Cheeks need to show, looks very odd without them.
- Hands could use reshaping.
- Nose lacks shading, and the shading on the belly is too spread-out.
- Shoes are too square.
Battle pose:
- Shoes look too long or flat.
- More/better shading on the nose and cheek/mouth.
- Mouth should look closed.
- Comb isn't tall enough.
- Pupils need to be solid black like Mario's.
- Cheeks need to show, looks very odd without them.
- Hands could use reshaping.
- Nose lacks shading, and the shading on the belly is too spread-out.
- Shoes are too square.
Battle pose:
- Shoes look too long or flat.
- More/better shading on the nose and cheek/mouth.
- Mouth should look closed.
- Comb isn't tall enough.