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[Comic] Metroid Chronicles
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Well, it's nice there aren't any grammatical errors...

But... it... isn't a very good story. The little bit of story present doesn't really flow very well, and is way too disorganized.
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[Comic] Metroid Chronicles - by ProtoTroid X - 09-23-2009, 04:35 PM
RE: [Comic] Metroid Chronicles - by Kitsu - 09-23-2009, 05:30 PM
RE: [Comic] Metroid Chronicles - by Maxpphire - 09-23-2009, 07:41 PM
RE: [Comic] Metroid Chronicles - by [robo9] - 09-23-2009, 08:29 PM
RE: [Comic] Metroid Chronicles - by Vipershark - 09-23-2009, 09:50 PM
RE: [Comic] Metroid Chronicles - by Maxpphire - 09-23-2009, 10:36 PM
RE: [Comic] Metroid Chronicles - by Nick - 09-23-2009, 10:55 PM
RE: [Comic] Metroid Chronicles - by Kitsu - 09-23-2009, 11:53 PM

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