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i guess you liked my story. i have written 3 total and here is the next one. cool donatello x andy

oh and warning if you dont like scat you wont like this story.

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in the magic land of new york city there was a sweer and inside this sewer was donatello he was a pretty cool ninja turtle because he had a kncack for machines. give him a machine. he will fix it. he is good.

anyway this story doesnt really start in new york city but ratehr it starts in wars world with a boy name andy seagull clarke. he is really well known for machines too what a koinkydink. this is kinda cool but the difference between him and donatello is that donatello is a turtles and andy is a boy.
so andy is sleeping and max waske up andy by dropping a chocolate bar on andys foot. and then sami tried to eat andys foot. "ewww" said sami this isnt chocolate this is a foot.

oh sorry said andy


well anyway said nell its time for drill practice you must get ready in case terewas really a war!!! because if we get bombed well the first war would happen againe
"thats not good." said max. "then i cant lift waits"
"thats right said nell" u will be scrawny if this happens.
max quivered in his boots scaed to imagine a shrimpty version of himself because if he was shrimpy he could not get his bonus on the map.

meanwhile in the sewers of new york dionatello was working on his best machine yet. "yo donny" said raph "what are you making it looks like a toaster on staroids put that toy away"
"no!!!!!!!" said donatello "i know what i am doig i am almost done if i finish this i can go into the videogame"
"hey that would be rly cool cowabinga said" michelengleo as he hdanced around eating pizza. "so u can be the first to test it" said donny as he flipped th switch and then weird beams came out of the machine
and a loid grinding noise this perobably wasnt good but what a coincidence as michelangelo as he was eating pizza and dancing he was also playing advancewars in his game boy he got sucked into the video game and donny was in the war of the worlds
oh no


this is a "mistake" said donatello "i will be in trouble with splinter if he finds out?" "yes he will "said kanbei" hello i am kanbei i am the great samurai"
"oh god this reminds me of that movie iwas in" said donatello "i live in america i am in japan help me get to america" "ok said kanbei" and grimm said OHHHHH YEAAAAAAHHHH and thrwew pencil neck donatello into orange star. because it looks like america on a map.

"oh dear" said donatello 'this isnt groovy" 'oh no its a turtle' said andy 'i am scared of reptiles."

"dont woryy said" donatello i am a ice titrlev pleae show mte how to get to manhatten.
"sorry guy i dont know where that is do you like to build machines" said andy
"wow i love to" said donny
"cool lets be friends." said andy as he gave donatello his wrench and together they built
a dispenser.


anyway the story continues and then donatello was throwing a bunch of machine parts around machanices and machking reall ycoll robots. because orange star and andy liked robots. "wow" said nell "cool bots". "thanx" said donny "hey andy your flight instructor is kind of cute." "but i dont fly planes i dont even know what airports do" said andy. "maybe you could talk to her i will finis hbuilding some more robots ill work on the chip in the robot with my wrench and i will finis hthe robot but i promise i wont finis hit all the way so we can still ahve some teamwork done because i like you you are a nice friend even through you are green."
"thanks that means a lot to me" said donatello and he walked to nell. "hey nell um can i ask you something?" he asked nell. "sure dont be shy is it about my breasts?"
"yes as a matter of fact it is they are pretty cool i think they are amazing compared to manhattan new york boobs."
nell blushed. this was kind of cute coming from a big green man
"well ive never been able to say that i have been with a big green man only little green men would you like to be my green second in command
"sure" said donny as he put on a generals uniform but as soon as he put on the pants nell said "no please dont show me your soldiers" "what are you talkking abou i am not a soldier i am a ninja turtle" said donatello.
"i mean your soldier." said nel land she pulled his big monsterous soldier out of his shell. "whoa" said donatello "your going a bit fast." i know "said nell. " i am thinking of a word that starts with r and it has to do whith what is in my hand right now.
and then nell allowed donnys troops to enter the mountain unit. "COWABUNGA" said donatello.
ten andy came in and he was scared about what he saw "hey guys whats that is the soldier going into the mountain unit i remember from field training that when a soldier is in the mountains he gains defense let me pull out my bomber and bomb you." so andy pulled down his pants while nell was enjoying his soldiers and then andy pooped on everyone afters todays chicken wraps i nthe mess hall were really heavy with chicken and lettuce which made his poops really powerful and lustrious

"cool" said donatello and nel lat the same time " i love it whe ni am bombed on" they both said and they enjoyed the battle scenario going on in the hanger where the robots were being assembled.

hours later donatello and andy worked on the coolest robot ever. this robot could take donatello back to the real world. thanks for the memories said donatello "i am really going to miss you all even you olaf" and olaf from the blue moon terrirorty tipped his hat in respect to the tannish green man turtle legend.
donny zappeed back intothe world and there he saw leonardo. "whoa you wouldny believe waht i was just doing" said donatello "cowabunga"
"oh ok donny i hope you will tell us all about it over a game of advance wars." said leo. and donny was kind of nervous but now that he knew the cool straetegy to beat leo by putting his soldiers in the mountain units and sending a bomber over to the mountains where they had no cover was a really good idea. so he did this in the game and beat everybody and then they said "donny your so smart i kind of want to play again buty i want some more pizza."


"tequila" said splinter as he drank his tea.

the end?????????
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read my fanfictions!!!! - by Kosheh - 10-15-2009, 07:25 PM
RE: read my fanfictions!!!! - by Flame - 10-15-2009, 07:26 PM
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