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[Pik]

aaaaaaaa messy linesssssssss

I see the structure lines (Which they don't seem to help or do anything in this case), so you should clean that up too.


The flow of Dazz's hair is unatural, and his hat is off center. (actually, his whole head is)


You should've used more perspective/foreshortening in this drawing, otherwise you get stiff, boring poses.


The way you drew his shirt makes it look like He's made of two parts.

I don't like the way that you drew "tSR," since it's in your handwriting and not text-like.

also hands look off as fuck and I don't understand why people can't draw them. You should start out with a pentagon so the placement of the fingers is correct, by the way.

He doesn't seem to have any thumbs either. His neck is too simple and it looks like you used a cartoon style to get away without knowing anything/much about anatomy.

Feet look too square

As for Zee, he just seems to be made out of basic shapes. He's also very flat looking.


ect ect