[art] amster's shtuff

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OH HI I REMEMBER YOU ON DEVIANTART WHAT'S UP AMSTER

It's cool, but there's one thing I don't like: you alternate between very thick outlines and very thin outlines, I'm mainly thinking of that second pic and more of the face (eye, nose mouth). I'm aware it's a stylistic choice as it's less blatant in the first picture, so do as you wish, just giving my impressions

actually I was going to say that she doesn't alternate between lines enough

the difference between thick and thin lines is essential to a drawing. it gives that additional difference between small details and places that has more volume or that need more highlight. Like outside lines.



here, I think you should make your lines vary more within the line itself, I made a crappy example to show:



the lines should vary more than that but I think you get the idea