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I just realized it, but you have a problem. You saved it as a jpg. NOT GOOD. While at the moment it isn't noticable till you zoom in, you really need to fix that. Use .png. I fixed it up the best I could with posterizing, but it may not be EXACTLY what it was.
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One small issue is that while your grays are fine while they're with each other, the grey contrasts too much with the white, as evident on the hat. Also, the outline on the 'stache is WAY too thick, two pixels and then the outer-AA on top of that. Lighten the outer-AA a bit, as right now it just looks like black at 100%. Also, work on rounding out the curves of the 'stache a little.
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A little help. - by Dave - 11-07-2009, 09:04 PM
RE: A little help. - by Gors - 11-08-2009, 08:14 AM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-08-2009, 02:17 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-08-2009, 02:36 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-08-2009, 02:41 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-08-2009, 03:06 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-08-2009, 03:13 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-11-2009, 05:20 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-11-2009, 05:49 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-12-2009, 07:39 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-12-2009, 09:18 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-13-2009, 04:41 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-13-2009, 08:28 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-14-2009, 04:21 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-14-2009, 09:43 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-15-2009, 01:29 PM
RE: A little help. - by Owlthief - 11-15-2009, 05:24 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-15-2009, 08:10 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-15-2009, 09:24 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-16-2009, 06:52 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-16-2009, 08:08 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-17-2009, 04:56 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-17-2009, 05:38 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-17-2009, 05:39 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-17-2009, 06:42 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-17-2009, 07:30 PM
RE: A little help. - by Ego - 11-17-2009, 08:14 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-17-2009, 08:31 PM
RE: A little help. - by Dave - 11-20-2009, 05:42 PM

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