11-11-2009, 12:36 AM
First off, I should point out that they DO look like the characters they are meant to resemble. Technically however, there are many shortcomings. Now critting each one individually would be long for me, and I'm just too tired to do that.
WindDragonKP has a bunch of good points, so listen to him too!
Now, Blue's hat needs to be rounded off(as in ADD pixels, not subract them). Sapphire's bandana is too high on her head, and the ties are a little too square. Her and Ruby both have angry eyes here; get rid of that. Ruby's hair is a little too blocky, but otherwise he's good. Any reason why you chose Ruby's green palette? Kris? Well, she needs a LOT of work. Take a whole new shot at it, try hard to mimic the style of the other ones, and use references. She may have only had one game, but she has a manga presence to draw off of too.
Team Aqua is pretty good. Second from the left is too skinny, and Archie doesn't look enough like Archie. Think "square-ish face".
Team Magma is really good. Aside from them all reading pretty similar(which is to be expected), Maxie looks AWESOME.
Norse Joy is pretty much fine, but I think the hat thing is off. Take another shot at the hat, see if you can't make it better. Just don't delete this one, I'd like to compare.
I don't know much about the coordinators, but 4, 5, and 6 from the left have something odd with their hair. Try to style match them, see if they can get better. Also, 3rd from the left's hat looks flat.
Jesse & James: Ick. Jesse does NOT look like herself, and James' hair is too blocky and big. His uniform is good though.
Butch & Cassidy: Uh oh. Butch's hair is TOTALLY weird, and, worse, Cassidy's is pillow shaded. FIX.
Um, other two rockets: White Hair is good, but Blond looks kind of pillow-y. See about making it more in style. Who these two anyway? I stopped watching the anime.
Elite 4 is pretty good, but Lorelei's hips are too wide. Agatha is fine.
I can see the OBVIOUS Red inspirations, but this is Ash, not Red. Show his face, Ash is happy, not Angsty like Red. Paul's head is a bit too round.
Inuyasha characters actually look pretty damn good.
Huh. I guess I did them all anyway. Whatever. Lucky you.
Main point is: PUT. THEM. IN. STYLE. Get that, and I'll think it'll work out just fine.
Good luck.
WindDragonKP has a bunch of good points, so listen to him too!
Now, Blue's hat needs to be rounded off(as in ADD pixels, not subract them). Sapphire's bandana is too high on her head, and the ties are a little too square. Her and Ruby both have angry eyes here; get rid of that. Ruby's hair is a little too blocky, but otherwise he's good. Any reason why you chose Ruby's green palette? Kris? Well, she needs a LOT of work. Take a whole new shot at it, try hard to mimic the style of the other ones, and use references. She may have only had one game, but she has a manga presence to draw off of too.
Team Aqua is pretty good. Second from the left is too skinny, and Archie doesn't look enough like Archie. Think "square-ish face".
Team Magma is really good. Aside from them all reading pretty similar(which is to be expected), Maxie looks AWESOME.
Norse Joy is pretty much fine, but I think the hat thing is off. Take another shot at the hat, see if you can't make it better. Just don't delete this one, I'd like to compare.
I don't know much about the coordinators, but 4, 5, and 6 from the left have something odd with their hair. Try to style match them, see if they can get better. Also, 3rd from the left's hat looks flat.
Jesse & James: Ick. Jesse does NOT look like herself, and James' hair is too blocky and big. His uniform is good though.
Butch & Cassidy: Uh oh. Butch's hair is TOTALLY weird, and, worse, Cassidy's is pillow shaded. FIX.
Um, other two rockets: White Hair is good, but Blond looks kind of pillow-y. See about making it more in style. Who these two anyway? I stopped watching the anime.
Elite 4 is pretty good, but Lorelei's hips are too wide. Agatha is fine.
I can see the OBVIOUS Red inspirations, but this is Ash, not Red. Show his face, Ash is happy, not Angsty like Red. Paul's head is a bit too round.
Inuyasha characters actually look pretty damn good.
Huh. I guess I did them all anyway. Whatever. Lucky you.
Main point is: PUT. THEM. IN. STYLE. Get that, and I'll think it'll work out just fine.
Good luck.
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