11-15-2009, 10:41 PM
It does. When I complimented the outlines, I did still think there needed to be a bit of cleanup on them. If you alter it to be only 1 pixel thick everywhere, it should look good. You have an okay grasp of shading, but I'd add another shade I think, and I don't think there should be a mouth(at least right now).
If you don't mind, I did my own edit.
If you don't mind, I did my own edit.