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My Karts
Spriter eye time!

All of your karts suffer from the same problems; lack of depth, washed-out palettes, messed-up shapes, and sloppy shading. Some of them look like they were slapped together in two minutes with the line tool, whereas others suffer from general poor construction and even poorer shading (the bulldozer-esque one, especially.) Your palettes are very dry and uninspiring. They need more vibrance, contrast and saturation. If you don't know what those terms mean, look them up. They'll help a lot more in the future. Your shading is very messy and does not contour with the shape of your vehicles. The vehicles also look almost paper because of how two-dimensional they look. They need a lot more depth, which can be improved by following the above advice I gave you.

If you have a hard time, I can whip up an edit or two later, maybe.

Good luck.
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My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-22-2009, 09:16 PM
RE: My Karts - by Gollum - 11-22-2009, 09:39 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-22-2009, 09:55 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-22-2009, 10:03 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-22-2009, 10:08 PM
RE: My Karts - by CeeY - 11-22-2009, 10:22 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-22-2009, 10:24 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-22-2009, 10:29 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-22-2009, 10:34 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-22-2009, 10:45 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-22-2009, 10:52 PM
RE: My Karts - by Gollum - 11-22-2009, 10:52 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-22-2009, 11:05 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-22-2009, 11:18 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-22-2009, 11:35 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-22-2009, 11:42 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-22-2009, 11:52 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 12:15 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 12:20 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 12:29 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 12:34 AM
RE: My Karts - by Rhyme - 11-23-2009, 12:37 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 12:40 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 01:08 AM
RE: My Karts - by Rhyme - 11-23-2009, 01:11 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 01:17 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 01:20 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 01:23 AM
RE: My Karts - by Rhyme - 11-23-2009, 01:25 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 01:26 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 01:29 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 01:34 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 01:36 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 01:37 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 01:40 AM
RE: My Karts - by Rhyme - 11-23-2009, 01:39 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 01:47 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 01:53 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 01:56 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 01:58 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 02:16 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 02:28 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 02:31 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 02:33 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 02:42 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 02:53 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 03:01 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 03:06 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 03:14 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 03:17 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 03:18 AM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 03:22 AM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 12:50 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 03:16 PM
RE: My Karts - by Baegal - 11-23-2009, 03:51 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 04:00 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 04:17 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 04:51 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 05:01 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 05:08 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 05:18 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 05:21 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 05:55 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 06:13 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 06:20 PM
RE: My Karts - by Rhyme - 11-23-2009, 07:12 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 07:21 PM
RE: My Karts - by Baegal - 11-23-2009, 07:33 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 07:41 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 07:44 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 08:21 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 08:57 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 08:58 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 09:08 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 09:12 PM
RE: My Karts - by Baegal - 11-23-2009, 09:21 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 10:07 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 10:29 PM
RE: My Karts - by Cobalt Blue - 11-23-2009, 11:19 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 11:20 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 11:26 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 11:35 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 11:38 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-23-2009, 11:41 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-23-2009, 11:44 PM
RE: My Karts - by Rhyme - 11-23-2009, 11:54 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 02:06 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 02:11 PM
RE: My Karts - by Rhyme - 11-24-2009, 02:21 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 02:22 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 02:25 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 02:33 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 02:53 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 02:57 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 03:04 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 03:09 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 03:12 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 03:17 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 03:25 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 03:26 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 03:28 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 03:31 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 03:37 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 03:46 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 03:55 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 04:04 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 04:06 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 04:25 PM
RE: My Karts - by Baegal - 11-24-2009, 04:32 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 04:32 PM
RE: My Karts - by Alpha Six - 11-24-2009, 04:33 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 04:34 PM
RE: My Karts - by Alpha Six - 11-24-2009, 04:38 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 05:14 PM
RE: My Karts - by Alpha Six - 11-24-2009, 05:16 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 05:21 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 05:22 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 05:26 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 06:42 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 06:49 PM
RE: My Karts - by zwb147 - 11-24-2009, 07:26 PM
RE: My Karts - by Stooben - 11-24-2009, 07:33 PM
RE: My Karts - by Baegal - 11-24-2009, 10:12 PM
RE: My Karts - by Cobalt Blue - 11-24-2009, 10:39 PM
RE: My Karts - by Alpha Six - 11-24-2009, 11:01 PM

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