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(11-25-2009, 04:46 PM)Number Six Wrote: Yeah, but did you actually READ it, Groove? I only thumbed through it and I noticed ALL of the grammar was spot-on except for the capitals. Leaving me to believe that no capitals is a stylistic choice, rather than laziness. He wasn't lazy enough to SPELL things correctly, and use correct punctuation in practically all of his sentences.

So what's the problem? It's obviously not laziness.

No, I didn't read it, but can you blame me? Things like care in presentation, or at least going to the length of explaining what the story's about in topic title or as a synopsis in the first post in the thread are small (not especially difficult) things that might want to make people actually read it.

Can you honestly say that when someone posts sheets on SD using the attachment system, that you've gone and opened it every time? It's the same thing.

But since you're telling me it's readable otherwise, then I don't mind reading it.

Edit: You're right, it's not bad. As a doctor, I'm a little surprised the e-mail was structured like that (he seems to have the same sentence structure style as the main character, which usually shouldn't be the case unless they're the same person), and it petered out a bit towards the end of the passage, but it does feel like it'll go somewhere if you stick at it~
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im gay - by GaryASPG - 11-25-2009, 04:38 PM
RE: im gay - by Whispy - 11-25-2009, 04:40 PM
RE: im gay - by GaryASPG - 11-25-2009, 04:41 PM
RE: im gay - by GrooveMan.exe - 11-25-2009, 04:43 PM
RE: im gay - by Alpha Six - 11-25-2009, 04:46 PM
RE: im gay - by GrooveMan.exe - 11-25-2009, 04:56 PM
RE: im gay - by Alpha Six - 11-25-2009, 05:11 PM
RE: im gay - by Father Christmas - 11-25-2009, 04:48 PM
RE: im gay - by GaryASPG - 11-25-2009, 04:59 PM
RE: im gay - by Vipershark - 11-25-2009, 05:20 PM
RE: im gay - by Baegal - 11-25-2009, 08:36 PM
RE: im gay - by Whispy - 11-25-2009, 05:34 PM
RE: im gay - by Rosencrantz - 11-25-2009, 06:35 PM
RE: im gay - by Rökkan - 11-25-2009, 08:02 PM
RE: im gay - by Vipershark - 11-25-2009, 08:08 PM
RE: im gay - by Stooben - 11-25-2009, 08:12 PM
RE: im gay - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 11-28-2009, 09:15 AM
RE: im gay - by SpritingGod - 01-02-2010, 01:13 PM
RE: im gay - by Baegal - 01-02-2010, 01:53 PM
RE: im gay - by GrooveMan.exe - 01-02-2010, 02:23 PM

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