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I actually like this

it developed pretty well, and I definitely picked up on a sense of the purposeless atmosphere of the story

I'm just a little iffy about the whole noncaps thing, but then again it definitely made it a more interesting read~
HAVE I BEEN MISLEAD?? [Image: TeamStory.gif] THE DREAM ISN'T DEAD???

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im gay - by GaryASPG - 11-25-2009, 04:38 PM
RE: im gay - by Whispy - 11-25-2009, 04:40 PM
RE: im gay - by GaryASPG - 11-25-2009, 04:41 PM
RE: im gay - by GrooveMan.exe - 11-25-2009, 04:43 PM
RE: im gay - by Alpha Six - 11-25-2009, 04:46 PM
RE: im gay - by GrooveMan.exe - 11-25-2009, 04:56 PM
RE: im gay - by Alpha Six - 11-25-2009, 05:11 PM
RE: im gay - by Father Christmas - 11-25-2009, 04:48 PM
RE: im gay - by GaryASPG - 11-25-2009, 04:59 PM
RE: im gay - by Vipershark - 11-25-2009, 05:20 PM
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RE: im gay - by Whispy - 11-25-2009, 05:34 PM
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