07-26-2008, 09:23 PM
Wow, I can't believe I wasn't aware of this! A few things though.
The red spot on top of the head shouldn't be there.
The pose where he goes red shouldn't fill the whole body. It should start at the bottom of the head. The mouth should stay one color for that pose.
The side pose walk looks weird, plus the mouth area needs work. He looks like he's in shock.
Also, try to put it all on one sheet. They look kinda small on their own. Toadette too, maybe?
The red spot on top of the head shouldn't be there.
The pose where he goes red shouldn't fill the whole body. It should start at the bottom of the head. The mouth should stay one color for that pose.
The side pose walk looks weird, plus the mouth area needs work. He looks like he's in shock.
Also, try to put it all on one sheet. They look kinda small on their own. Toadette too, maybe?
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