12-05-2009, 12:44 AM
Poltergust Luigi isn't bad, however shading needs some improvement. It needs some more darker shading so it doesn't look like it's solid pink, but rather so it looks red collectively. Some of the animations also may need some smoothing (ex. using the Poltergust).
Your other two aren't good, I'll be honest. They're obvious edits of existing sheets. I would seriously suggest scrapping that Bow and fixing Jerry quite a bit.
Your other two aren't good, I'll be honest. They're obvious edits of existing sheets. I would seriously suggest scrapping that Bow and fixing Jerry quite a bit.