Ok you've got to small amount of colors, you could use some shading in the eyes and the body, and I don't get the poses. Dither out and make it look like sparks are flying out. Look at the SMW one for REF.
AND just look at what Goemer gave you, make it look exactly like that but in M&L.
AND just look at what Goemer gave you, make it look exactly like that but in M&L.