World of Dorkcraft

[Jovian-12]

I have one little nitpicky critique:

in comics, it's best to have panels with white spaces between their borders. panels that are just separated by their border look smushed together and flow less smoothly to the eye. it may not seem that way to you, but if you do put white in between the panels it can make a huge difference.

compare!

basically think of the panels as separate and distinct images rather than parts of a whole.

but otherwise the form is fine to me. keep it up! I always want to do comics but I never have the patience...