01-31-2010, 11:30 AM
The body size is good, it's his head that throws it off. You should use simpler shapes to represent things like eyes and hair, right now it seems kinda anime-ish while the body does not really look all that anime. The hair's shape looks really off as well. It looks a little unnatural and rushed, I think you should go back and try to add a more fluent shape rather than the really angular lines that you have now. The belt is also reeally bugging me. It does not have a smooth shape or one that clearly represents that its wrapped around him. Also, the width changes in the second half of the belt. Now the clothes shape is also odd, the overcoat shirt thing's flaps are rigidly shaped and look like there sort of supposed to have a crease or bend or fold in it, but it does not really come off that way.
Without continuing to repeat myself I think you should go back and look at the shape of the lineart, some of the stuff is really off
The shield is really bugging me in the promo art, it looks so odd shadpe and shading wise. It looks like shading was applied without taking the shape of the shield into account. All I really see is a repeated highlight pattern with different colors.
Without continuing to repeat myself I think you should go back and look at the shape of the lineart, some of the stuff is really off
The shield is really bugging me in the promo art, it looks so odd shadpe and shading wise. It looks like shading was applied without taking the shape of the shield into account. All I really see is a repeated highlight pattern with different colors.