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The Legend Of Luigi
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08-13-2008, 04:28 PM
Colored Textboxes, broken forth wall, self-insert, and that poor attempt at humor in the first two panels failed. You've got AA going against the black background, the character is a poor attempt at editing, and your title panel is very close to illegible. Also, mixing sprite styles is bad.
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The Legend Of Luigi - by Perigi - 08-13-2008, 12:34 PM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Zee - 08-13-2008, 04:28 PM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Perigi - 08-13-2008, 04:58 PM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Rakia - 08-13-2008, 05:10 PM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Perigi - 08-13-2008, 05:39 PM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Kairos - 08-14-2008, 11:26 AM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Goemar - 08-13-2008, 08:07 PM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Flare - 08-13-2008, 08:28 PM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Alpha Six - 08-14-2008, 03:37 AM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Manaphy94 - 08-14-2008, 01:00 PM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Perigi - 08-14-2008, 01:26 PM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Raytheon - 08-16-2008, 01:43 AM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by Perigi - 08-17-2008, 10:19 PM
RE: The Legend Of Luigi - by J-bit - 08-18-2008, 12:37 PM
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