03-10-2010, 04:35 PM
(This post was last modified: 03-10-2010, 05:21 PM by ProtoTroid X.)
(03-10-2010, 08:47 AM)Lunyka Wrote: It's not very interesting. I suggest you find a way to make it more interesting.
That might be becuase the story hasn't quite started to show. It'll get there though.
EDIT: I have updates:
Page6: Climbing through Brinstar
Page7: Look! It's the Brain!
Page8: Tremble before the Brain!
Page9: Under Arrest
Page10: Time to die?