03-15-2010, 01:46 AM
Well, as everybody else said, it should be a lot smoother. It looks waaaaaay to blocky. The shading is also off quite a bit and i can see multiple light sources. In ML3 the light source is from the top. Also, you should do it part by part and post it instead of doing every part at once then posting because then if you screw up you're gonna have to redo the whole thing again. Just work on it one thing at a time. Until you get the concept of the style, you obviously havn't yet, start with something small, like a arm or leg. That is, even if you continue at this for now. I think you should put this to a pause and sprite some easier things until you're used to it, then you can try this again.
Then again, this is just my opinion.
Then again, this is just my opinion.