03-30-2010, 09:03 PM
You have a huge issue with line consistency, your characters are awfully messy and the background looks like it took five minutes at most.
Please note that I'm only critiquing the first piece, although there are consistency issues with the second one as well. They look too much like doodles and not enough like polished products.
And I can't read what the guy on the chair is at ALL. I don't know if he's facing at an angle or what.
Please note that I'm only critiquing the first piece, although there are consistency issues with the second one as well. They look too much like doodles and not enough like polished products.
And I can't read what the guy on the chair is at ALL. I don't know if he's facing at an angle or what.