08-19-2008, 10:43 AM
I'm assuming that the sheet on page 3 is the latest sheet? It still looks MUCH to megaman-y, with the huge rounded one piece boots and gloves. I'm not really good at this myself, but I tried to improve yours.
![[Image: Tabuutry.png]](http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e140/Vipershark/Tabuutry.png)
Mine is on the left.
I fixed up a few lines to try to take away the "huge boot syndrome", because the legs should be about the same width the whole way, and not suddenly get extremely large. I tried to take away some of the roundness, but it didn't work too well.
Also, it looked like some of the megaman-ness came from the shading, so I decided to pillow it since the rest of the stuff is pillowed also. I know I shouldn't do that, but I wasn't sure where to put the lightsource if I was to shade it normally. Also I lightened up the eyes, trying to make it look more human. It didn't work, much.
But uhh, yeah. Someone else give it a shot.
Mine is on the left.
I fixed up a few lines to try to take away the "huge boot syndrome", because the legs should be about the same width the whole way, and not suddenly get extremely large. I tried to take away some of the roundness, but it didn't work too well.
Also, it looked like some of the megaman-ness came from the shading, so I decided to pillow it since the rest of the stuff is pillowed also. I know I shouldn't do that, but I wasn't sure where to put the lightsource if I was to shade it normally. Also I lightened up the eyes, trying to make it look more human. It didn't work, much.
But uhh, yeah. Someone else give it a shot.
![[Image: ndsMEF0.gif]](http://i.imgur.com/ndsMEF0.gif)
![[Image: sig.gif]](http://backloggery.com/vipershark/sig.gif)