Pokemon Pink

[Hoeloe]

I might see what I can do about fixing my Moltres. If I'm correct, the problem with it is too much anti-aliasing, and the beak has an odd bulge in it.

EDIT: Try this.

I think the problem may relate to it being overshaded. Check out the Yellow Moltres, It has almost no shading on the body, to keep the orange color prominent. Something about the shape of the wings looks odd too, they're too round or something. Head and beak are too small I think. And I believe the main readability issue lies in the fact that the wing fire and tail fire blend together, but there's no real way to fix that with that pose (which is a shame, cause the pose is sweet). It may just be easier to start from scratch.

I may do just that.

I made a Pidgey!



Left is Yellow, 2nd left is finished Pidgey, 2nd right is a shape draft, right is tail-less.

Everything looks good, except thing wings. I think the feathers should be more defined, and perhaps the wings overall bigger.

Check this out for what I mean. On this note, the "eyebrows" could be a bit thicker. Really good start though.

Hows that? Any better?