Pokemon Pink

[Hoeloe]

Yes! Definitely going in the right direction. Make the shading simpler on the wings/body/brow, and define the feathers even more. Maybe thin out the brown on the wings. Actually, your Pidgeotto would be a perfect reference for what I mean.

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EDIT: Forgot the change the wing thickness, but I wanted to let you know I made them thick on purpose, to try and give it a more "chibi" style, as opposed to the look of a sleek bird. If you still think I need to change it, I'll go ahead and do so, just throwing that out there.

On another note, I started Moltres from scratch again. Slightly different pose this time, and hopefully more readable.



Left and right at the bottom are slightly different. Personally, I prefer the one on the right, but you can choose which you prefer.

Yes, there's one without fire. I always keep copies at certain stages of spriting, in case something goes horribly wrong.

EDIT 2: Since I noted that the reservation system has gone, I thought I might as well hurry along with this: (Note, the side poses are slightly lower due to her hat)



I also drew a back sprite, and here's a coloured version, just in case.