04-11-2010, 01:21 AM
I'm not gonna lie.
The original ones that you had going were much better.
And this is another new thing.
But since technically you did go back to spriting pikmin (and actually appear to be listening to crits) I'll give you a pass.
You should get rid of those black outlines. They look out of place.
For example, use a really dark shade of red on the nose and arm rather than black.
Same with yellow's ears, etc.
The original ones that you had going were much better.
And this is another new thing.
But since technically you did go back to spriting pikmin (and actually appear to be listening to crits) I'll give you a pass.
You should get rid of those black outlines. They look out of place.
For example, use a really dark shade of red on the nose and arm rather than black.
Same with yellow's ears, etc.