04-11-2010, 12:28 PM
Pidgey looks nice now.
And holy shit I love the Moltres man! I think the neck needs more definition, and the wings (actual wings, not the fire) could be a bit bigger and "sketchy", as in, not rounded. Also I'd try outlining the fire on the head with black to distinguish it more from the wing fire. Work off the bottom right one. Looking really sweet aside from those small details.
Pink looks like she's slouched. Also the arm is waaay off to be honest. Too thick and awkwardly bent. Overworld looks good, except for the hat on the side poses, I can't place what I don't like about it.
And a heads up: I'll be really busy this week, so unfortunately I may not have time for the project.
And holy shit I love the Moltres man! I think the neck needs more definition, and the wings (actual wings, not the fire) could be a bit bigger and "sketchy", as in, not rounded. Also I'd try outlining the fire on the head with black to distinguish it more from the wing fire. Work off the bottom right one. Looking really sweet aside from those small details.
Pink looks like she's slouched. Also the arm is waaay off to be honest. Too thick and awkwardly bent. Overworld looks good, except for the hat on the side poses, I can't place what I don't like about it.
And a heads up: I'll be really busy this week, so unfortunately I may not have time for the project.