04-25-2010, 05:23 PM
(04-24-2010, 07:23 PM)*Gorsal* Wrote: ugh
I don't know what I'm hearing
this song is all broken; it doesn't follow a regular timing. Also, that 'Mary Had a Little Lamb' part is too loud and ear grating. At least, make it less loud, so it won't be an ear rape
heh, sorry. I probably should have said it's intended to be a abit ear rapey, but i'll agree it is very broken and chopped. It's kinda influenced by Raptor-Khalan's tune "LAZERNIPPLES".
I'm still trying to figure how to fix this whole thing.
(04-25-2010, 01:50 PM)Alpha Six Wrote: you tried way too hard to be technical and melodic at the same time
Yes I did try quite hard. But at least I tried. It'd probably sound worse if I didn't try to get technical and melodic.
I guess I should have mentioned i've only been using milkytracker for like 2 or 3 months.
Thanks for the feedback.