In fact, neither of those are good.
The outline should not be black, in fact, all of the colours are much better in the second one.
However, the line art is poor. There are a lot of straight lines, for example, in the ears, where curves should be used, and it looks nothing like Ratatta. Not even in the slightest. A rat's body does not have four hoof-like feet, and neither is it's head that shape.
The outline should not be black, in fact, all of the colours are much better in the second one.
However, the line art is poor. There are a lot of straight lines, for example, in the ears, where curves should be used, and it looks nothing like Ratatta. Not even in the slightest. A rat's body does not have four hoof-like feet, and neither is it's head that shape.
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