05-18-2010, 01:16 AM
I did. I said "all of it."
The entire sprite is literally just a stretched version of the original, retaining all of the problems the original had, and more. The sprite needs to be re-done, with the new style in mind-- not just given a new palette and left to chill.
FYI I'm not really critiquing "yours" as much as I am "the original." It needs to be done over with the new style, palettes, shading and sizing in mind.
I could pick the entire sprite apart and tell you every little detail that's wrong with it, but it's a waste of time because there's something wrong everywhere. It makes more sense to just say "do it over."
The entire sprite is literally just a stretched version of the original, retaining all of the problems the original had, and more. The sprite needs to be re-done, with the new style in mind-- not just given a new palette and left to chill.
FYI I'm not really critiquing "yours" as much as I am "the original." It needs to be done over with the new style, palettes, shading and sizing in mind.
I could pick the entire sprite apart and tell you every little detail that's wrong with it, but it's a waste of time because there's something wrong everywhere. It makes more sense to just say "do it over."