05-18-2010, 10:59 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-18-2010, 10:59 AM by Locked Achievement.)
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Marth isn't that dull. he needs more bright colours
The sword is definitely too short. Rotate it further upwards
all the lines are too straight. Did you just use the line tool for the outline?
Marth is much skinnier
his headis too short. Make it taller
His face looks like there is nothing there apart from two faint eyes
try to make the patterns in the sword stand out more
put more creases into the cape around his neck
his cape is too dull in colour
Marth does have a sword sheath, you know.
Just one or two things that need improving.