05-19-2010, 05:01 AM
There's no sense of consistent anatomy. This really would benefit a lot more from being completely redone.
Also no offense, but your sense of shading is... not good. It's really messy and lumpy. Colors are still low on contrast and saturation, and it makes the entire end product look very amateur.
I know you're trying to help, but it may be a lot better off if a more experienced pixel art takes care of this sprite. It seems like we'll spend way too much time critiquing when someone more experienced could redo the sprite and it would look a lot better and more in-style.
Again, I mean absolutely no offense from this statement.
Also no offense, but your sense of shading is... not good. It's really messy and lumpy. Colors are still low on contrast and saturation, and it makes the entire end product look very amateur.
I know you're trying to help, but it may be a lot better off if a more experienced pixel art takes care of this sprite. It seems like we'll spend way too much time critiquing when someone more experienced could redo the sprite and it would look a lot better and more in-style.
Again, I mean absolutely no offense from this statement.