08-28-2008, 08:26 PM
2 crits from me.
1. The yellow palette doesn't look too good. Try fading it out to brown through orange.
2. The dithering spoils it.
Otherwise, not bad.
1. The yellow palette doesn't look too good. Try fading it out to brown through orange.
2. The dithering spoils it.
Otherwise, not bad.