Brawler1207's Art Portfolio

[Kosheh]

a comic book artist once dissected a girl's anime picture who was sitting right next to me yet told me my simplistic drawing was awesome save for texture wrinkles


anyway what he told this girl should apply well to you - and wow, i have to say your drawing reminds me of this girl's art I used to know. but, she suffered the problem much worse than you did - your hands, face etc. looks pretty decent.

it looks like you said "hey i'll draw this cute anime face in my sketchbook
this looks good maybe i'll draw the body and hands

this is kinda sexy let me put some feet on it and call it done"

it looks like parts of her body were afterthought after afterthought. luckily for you, this is easy to fix
Draw the whole body out next time very lightly where you plan the head, body, arms and legs should go and then just draw like you typically would. It's easier to better proportion out your work that way.

Also gonna wait for Zeemort on this one but the top image seems to be lacking emotion whatsoever, which is a big letdown given the character's trying to go out of her way to be sexy