-The backpack strap from the fronal Ness in the most recent picture seems to have been editted, making it less apparent. The arms now seem to partially meld with the yellow in Ness' shirt, making the chest/arm outline a little more confusing. I like it more the old way.
![[Image: nesswip.png]](http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/9980/nesswip.png)
![[Image: nesswip.png]](http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/9980/nesswip.png)
(I like the backpack strap, more then the newest version)
-Ness' arms on the Side Idle seem a little too far back, almost as he could touching his backpack with his elbows. A more relaxed arm pose, by straightning out the arm and moving it forward (so it rests on his side) could make it seem more natural.
-I like the tummy bump, it gives Ness a sense of weight. He looks better this way, then before without it (appears less flat).
Other then these observations, quite good. I like the effect of Ness' cap flap being more visible only to one side pose, making it seem he is rather rotated instead of mirrored. Well done.
(I like the backpack strap, more then the newest version)
-Ness' arms on the Side Idle seem a little too far back, almost as he could touching his backpack with his elbows. A more relaxed arm pose, by straightning out the arm and moving it forward (so it rests on his side) could make it seem more natural.
-I like the tummy bump, it gives Ness a sense of weight. He looks better this way, then before without it (appears less flat).
Other then these observations, quite good. I like the effect of Ness' cap flap being more visible only to one side pose, making it seem he is rather rotated instead of mirrored. Well done.
![[Image: butterfree.gif]](http://www.dragonflycave.com/wpay/butterfree.gif)