Uritor, The artic snow cone...

[Poetic_Alias]

I suppose you're right. My bad. I think it might be that the last sprite community I was a part of had gentler criticisms in comparison to TSR. Though you are right. people do get impatient. I just feel that most people shouldn't give this same attitude to newcomers because of past experiences. Still, I should probably get used to it.

Gentler != More helpful

I guess, in the end you're right. I'll be sure to remember that from now on.

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#Update




-Cropped eyes and made them smaller
-Made teeth straight I hope
-Choose to go with the pure ice tail and made the outline better

Hm, well it is looking better. Still, you should probably fix up the tail though. It's a little hard to tell that it's ice. From what I've seen on ice crystal sprites, the shades of blue get darker as you go further in to the center of each of the flat surfaces. Plus, the edges of the faces usually have a sort of dotted white outline near top (or wherever the light is coming from) This is a little hard for me to describe. I could quickly make an example if you want.

EDIT
Forgot to add this. For the palette, I'd say you should go for the first one. The lighter blue gives it a more glacial feel. You can easily tell it's oriented with ice.