rad dad chad had rad dad pad

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

yes, it is my problem for the face, i thought i made that clear with the possessive pronoun: it's my advice, it's my edit, you take it or you leave it, just remember that it is something which i have done voluntarily which shows my support and my will to make your piece better. if you think i've butchered your piece, too bad, i could even say my bad, my edit was going in the wrong direction you intended to go, i'm giving my point of view on it anyway; besides, my mistakes or butchering and that of others will only give you a wider range of possiblities from which you can draw some ideas and know what you don't want. i'll stop if it offends you that much.
anyway i made an edit on your most recent version, focussing more on the hat this time:

as you can see i'm thinking more of the skull and less of the hair when it comes to the width of the hat, i tilted it slightly and messed around with the rim. i added a moustache to make him more manly, i call it the "francisco".
btw you did a good job on the fringe to convey hair, may i suggest you do that more on the other parts? the main issue i see is in the blue dye, in which there are blobs of brown (i don't think hair dye's applied like that, i'll check) and the highlight looks too small, try fiddling with it.
looking forward to progress!