06-05-2010, 01:02 AM
just noticed the character has no neck, at all. his head is coming out of his chest. also, you have just way too many jagged/random black lines with several shades of the same color with minimal contrast between them. try to clean these all these black lines, then block out the base color of each part, and then add one single shade of color, avoiding as many random dots of detail as posible. its just something simple but that whould help you get a better vision on what should and what shouldn't/couldn't really be portrayed in the sprite.