remember my unfinished shawn contest 2 entry

[Adam]

Aside from what has been previously mentioned, I'd definitely like to see some more attention to the face. The eyes are overly large, and a tad more attention to facial construction would be nice. The features seem to be placed randomly. The jacket also doesn't seem to imply that there is a body underneath it- by implying where the limbs and such would be, it helps you determine where certain folds and indentions are going to be.

The colors are really good, though, and I'd like to see this fixed and finished. Keep at it!