06-18-2010, 10:17 AM
Wow, really good! I've always liked the Classic Sonic better than the new one. Looks very "AoSTH-y".
The red circles are what needs to be fixed.
-There should be shading at the top of his eye's since his skin hangs over a little
-The shine on his stomach shouldn't disappear so immediately.
-The shading on the lower part of the shoe closer to us's light-source is backwards.
-His right arm's middle finger is flat on one side.
-The end of his second spike is a bit too lumpy.
-The furthest ear should be shaded towards the bottom since his head blocks it a bit.
-The shading on the top of the ear closer to us is messy. Too much AA.
-The shine on his right eye should be moved a pixel down, and a pixel towards his left.
-The shine on his eyes shouldn't be shaded since, they're...well...shines.
I used the crits. above and fixed up most of it for you as an example.
These are looking really great though!
The red circles are what needs to be fixed.
-There should be shading at the top of his eye's since his skin hangs over a little
-The shine on his stomach shouldn't disappear so immediately.
-The shading on the lower part of the shoe closer to us's light-source is backwards.
-His right arm's middle finger is flat on one side.
-The end of his second spike is a bit too lumpy.
-The furthest ear should be shaded towards the bottom since his head blocks it a bit.
-The shading on the top of the ear closer to us is messy. Too much AA.
-The shine on his right eye should be moved a pixel down, and a pixel towards his left.
-The shine on his eyes shouldn't be shaded since, they're...well...shines.
I used the crits. above and fixed up most of it for you as an example.
These are looking really great though!