09-04-2008, 03:55 PM
Um, okay, welcome. Now, I don't want to sound like an ass, but I'm being truthful here. First off, the lineart is pretty poor. The leafy tops on the buildings are very poorly drawn. The lines are pretty sloppy on it. And the tree is waaaay too boxy. Have some more curves. Also with that, there's no shading as far as I can see. I'd put this in Sprite Discussion before you try submitting, because it won't be accepted like this. Don't lose confidence though, just try harder.