07-02-2010, 03:35 PM
His body should move with the rest of him. Like his body should tilt with the legs rather than everything just movign around it.
The heads positioning could really use some work too. Is he supposed to be pushing forward with all of his body (legs and heads forward at the same time) or swaying in his flight (legs forward, head back, etc)?
Also what's going on with his beak?
He appears to have an underbite but his upper beak still goes over his lower. +The upper beak is curved and the lower is straight out. The beak should fit into, rather than over, the lower part - or the lower part should have a bit of a groove shape, or something?
And what's the patch above the beak? Is that more beak in a different colour or different coloured feathers? 'cause the nostril should be on the beak.
Hope some of that was helpful.
The heads positioning could really use some work too. Is he supposed to be pushing forward with all of his body (legs and heads forward at the same time) or swaying in his flight (legs forward, head back, etc)?
Also what's going on with his beak?
He appears to have an underbite but his upper beak still goes over his lower. +The upper beak is curved and the lower is straight out. The beak should fit into, rather than over, the lower part - or the lower part should have a bit of a groove shape, or something?
And what's the patch above the beak? Is that more beak in a different colour or different coloured feathers? 'cause the nostril should be on the beak.
Hope some of that was helpful.
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