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[art] a blonde etna that rollerblades
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yeah, it's p. schweet bro, the coloring is pretty ace

the art style actually reminds me of how an old friend used to draw

the only crits I have are things that are probably intentional - for example I don't think it's very fitting for the character to have diamond-shaped eyes, it seems a little more in-character for Lilica to have more roundish eyes as she's the playful-looking type.
What I mean is that character art typically displays her without the lower eyelashes because they don't want her to look mature and sexy - that's what it seems you're going for here. The character's typically a little wider-eyed and more energetic looking - yap yap yes this could turn into a whole "this pose doesn't suit the character SHE'D BE IN AN ACTION SHOT", but I kinda get the style you're going for here - more casual, laid back Lilica, skating gear off...
this is someone's foot fetish request, isn't it >_>

However I'd think your response would be "This is my style I'll draw it how I want" and...honestly, I feel like if you modified the eyes I think you'd hurt the piece. It looks good - but bottom line, her eyes look a little too experienced to be on Lilica lol.
Play around with them, though, see if it helps. :/

Also I think making the wings a liiiiiiiittle larger would be good

sorry i'm not super crit-man today ):


but by all means, this is nit-picking! you do some great stuff - do draw/paint more, please!
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[art] a blonde etna that rollerblades - by Ashura - 07-07-2010, 02:40 PM
RE: [art] a blonde etna that rollerblades - by Kosheh - 07-07-2010, 04:40 PM

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