09-07-2008, 01:04 PM
Epic fail... sorry man but wow...
badly shaded... the bridge and ship levels are more drawings in paint than sprites, the boat should have an ocean background and actually have an animation cycle were it bobs up and down in waves.
The items have absolutely no shadeing/ bad shadeing.
The bridge is styled as though it were ment for non side scrolling characters, the portal above should have an animation cycle, the bridge should have a cycle were the King Bulblin runs in and blows it up, then a cycle for it being repaired by the portal, and then it needs a background as well, could stand for some shadeing.
And I can't say much for Kirby and his hats, those are more well done.
I would suggest takeing some tutorials on shadeing.
I rely shouldn't say they suck because I would have done worse when I first started out...
Just practice and get some tips.
I'm sure you can improove.
I'm not trying to be an ass, but theese are bad...
badly shaded... the bridge and ship levels are more drawings in paint than sprites, the boat should have an ocean background and actually have an animation cycle were it bobs up and down in waves.
The items have absolutely no shadeing/ bad shadeing.
The bridge is styled as though it were ment for non side scrolling characters, the portal above should have an animation cycle, the bridge should have a cycle were the King Bulblin runs in and blows it up, then a cycle for it being repaired by the portal, and then it needs a background as well, could stand for some shadeing.
And I can't say much for Kirby and his hats, those are more well done.
I would suggest takeing some tutorials on shadeing.
I rely shouldn't say they suck because I would have done worse when I first started out...
Just practice and get some tips.
I'm sure you can improove.
I'm not trying to be an ass, but theese are bad...