The University Of The Peninsular State, Just Below Georgia

[Adam]

not much of a critique but the amount of shades on the black man's arm makes it look really soft and kind of awkward. george bridgman's words: don't do something with 4 tones than you can do with 3. perhaps that lightest shade could be more of a highlight and specular rather than an entire area of light?

either way, yours have much more personality than chris's edit, and i feel like some stylistic direction should be allowed here, seeing how the characters look themselves. keep it up man