Strollin' Stu

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I want to add this into 1up's post

This isn't horrible for a beginner though. He can still fix these with some patience.

Thank you VERY much. That was the comment I was waiting on...
A constructive one.

This adds into the last part of 1up's post. The fact that Koopaul gave C+C without being blunt doesn't mean that he's giving PROPER advice. PROPER ADVICE is when someone gives you an advice that is valid, be it blunt or not. I'm tired of seeing people saying 'See? This is the C+C I wanted!', accepting only suave C+C and disregarding any other kind of post.