07-21-2010, 03:39 PM
sure, let me make an edit,
![[Image: 30mo5s0.jpg]](http://i26.tinypic.com/30mo5s0.jpg)
your sprite, my edit, a small, quick wireframe to base on, and the palette you were using.
the shading overall didn't help on how the lineart looked, making it feel really jagged and unstable. i used the same colors, removed most of the useless ones, and tried to give it more definition over the original, without altering it toomuch, its an idea, since id idnt spend much time on it.
your sprite, my edit, a small, quick wireframe to base on, and the palette you were using.
the shading overall didn't help on how the lineart looked, making it feel really jagged and unstable. i used the same colors, removed most of the useless ones, and tried to give it more definition over the original, without altering it toomuch, its an idea, since id idnt spend much time on it.