Concrit, please!

[Emma]

I plan on using a reference when I get to the clothes (because I suck at folds, lul) but I'd like to think my grasp of human anatomy is thus far good enough for me to continue to fuck around.

But if you guys think it sucks? I'll totally see if I can find a reference (and if not, photograph myself stood in front of the mirror or something).

ANYWAY: Here is what I have been working on for the last hour (give or take; i was also watching speed racer.)

Updated body (based largely on Tyvon's):


And now, bonus face and hair!


I'm aware my palettes could probably use some work, the shadow on the face isn't dark enough. But fffffffff I tried about eight or nine times and I just could not make it look right. So you get my first face palette (which was, coincidentally, the best one).

IDK how I feel about the hair - I don't like the colours. But black is freaking hard to shade and I'm terrible at making good brown palettes, soooo. You get this. I like the shape of it, though. And the shading. Sort of.

ALSO: I HATE THE EYES. THEY LOOK CREEPY. But it was the best I could make them look.